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[绿意盎然] 【老婆糖糖】作者：零零人

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很多文章都会有大篇幅的“淫文浪语”，其实这导致文章在阅读时代入感不强，本来正身临其境。忽然来一段没什么意义的对话，其实抓住情景的描写，双方的动作、神态，会使人的代入感更强，我以前看的一篇文章，好像叫《看妻子与儿子乱伦》，代入感就很强烈，当然，这只是我一家之语，楼主不必在意
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