hnchsh2

不错的文章！不过貌似还没有写完啊，期待楼主更新！

好象是编改编文，感觉和其他的小说有很多似曾相识的地方

大龙名不虚传啊~不过还没有发挥出肛交，而且没写到母亲心理把父亲完全忘记，被大龙完全征服了

用这种方法来激励学习，是个好办法，值得广大家长们借鉴，努力吧。

这篇文章有抄袭的嫌疑啊 故事情节好像在那个文章里看过 不过还是谢谢楼主分享

emp0613

楼主 你只不过把名字换了 可里面都情节都是老的 希望你可以在构思一下 支持你一下

badaoke

看了一下，文章还好，有情节但是不够丰富，希望楼主写出更好的文章

bro, your family incest was one of the best i hv read! it's show u r caring guy who anti rape, spike and what ever dirty tricks. in yours story , you can use study as an excuse to gain " mom body"! she became your women when ever you want her to be after then. another thing i like most is most mature women was out of shape due to no exercise rather you describe she was so well shape like 20's.

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• Xdents 金币 +2 I don't really know what is your meanin 2008-11-20 15:17

文章写的不错，情节也很精彩，不过结尾好象没写完。

taoyueqing

写的很好，过程开展的循序渐进！
如果节奏在放慢一点就更加的完美了，再接再厉！